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mellowcandle
mellowcandle
is it dark where you are
13drabbles Challenge
Drabbles Completed: 5/13

Title: Shadow
Series: ToA
Length: 300 words
Theme: #10, "The Present"
Character: Natalia (Asch/Natalia)


I might have stretched the "present" theme, but I count it since it takes place during the canon timeline rather than post-canon like most of my stuff. That makes it "the present".

I had two different ways I wanted to end it, and I went with this one since it seemed slightly more IC. The other would have been hotter and angrier, and wouldn't have fit within the context of their scene in Sheridan, and would have gone over the word limit.

I actually kept it drabble-length this time. Yay me.

I'll save the other idea for another time. Don't want to blow all my A/N at once anyway.

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Current Mood: accomplished accomplished
Current Music: longest night--howie day

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Comments
umilingual From: umilingual Date: September 28th, 2009 03:07 pm (UTC) (Link)
I don't know the context (I really should fix that), but I like it! Especially the way you described what a shadow is.
mellowcandle From: mellowcandle Date: September 28th, 2009 06:43 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thanks! I thought it was a good way of representing how he's there but not.

*hearts you for reading without context*
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