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mellowcandle
mellowcandle
meh
Okay, I'm almost done with the Guy parts of the chapter. I have one speech that reads like a non sequitur and I just can't seem to find a transition line that works. I feel like I can't move on from it until I fix it.

The Nat parts are kind of loosely written out, but I think I'm missing the emotional center. I may save one part for later so I don't have to worry about it now.


I am so, so sick of looking at this. I'm reaching the point where I really don't want to work on it anymore.

Current Mood: discontent discontent
Current Music: no need to argue--the cranberries

4 pathetic excuses or justify your existence
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cal_reflector From: cal_reflector Date: July 1st, 2010 11:59 pm (UTC) (Link)
Getting sick and tired of looking at our own writing is part of the process, no? I've been working on a 10K chapter for 2 weeks. It's nearly done, good thing too because I'm this close to throwing it off the Taipei 101.

I find spontaneity to be the best cure for monotony; leave some room for adding the unexpected, the silly, the dirty, the flippant.
mellowcandle From: mellowcandle Date: July 2nd, 2010 12:48 pm (UTC) (Link)
Good gravy, a 10K word chapter? Mine's around 3500 so far and I'm considering breaking it in two parts because I think it's too long.
serena_b From: serena_b Date: July 2nd, 2010 02:32 am (UTC) (Link)
Why not have someone else take a look at it? Maybe a fresh eye will see something your missing. Or maybe they'll tell you that it's fine the way it is. :)
mellowcandle From: mellowcandle Date: July 2nd, 2010 12:51 pm (UTC) (Link)
Once I finish it I'll post it for some feedback. I want to at least have it drafted out. I'm just frustrated at this taking so long to finish, I guess.
4 pathetic excuses or justify your existence