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as per norm - Idiot Control Now
bees on pie, burning rubber tires
mellowcandle
mellowcandle
as per norm
I have got to figure out what this next chapter is going to be.

I guess what I need to do is just write out any scenes I want and worry about how to paste them together later.


Part of my problem, as usual, is the paralyzing indecision of wondering if I should go with something or not. I have an idea that could give Luke and Tear something to do, which would be nice, but then I'd actually, like, have to do something with that.

Current Mood: confused confused
Current Music: girlfriend--matthew sweet

4 pathetic excuses or justify your existence
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cal_reflector From: cal_reflector Date: May 26th, 2012 03:54 pm (UTC) (Link)
Remember what your audiences are reading this for. Tear and Luke? No... People don't come to the steakhouse for the creamed spinach. They come for the steak.

Give them steak.
mellowcandle From: mellowcandle Date: May 26th, 2012 10:07 pm (UTC) (Link)
And yet the last time we went to our favorite steakhouse, D was jealous because he got the baked potato and I got the spinach, and the spinach was awesome. Not creamed, but wilted with parmesan cheese. Yummy.

And steak alone is not a meal.
cal_reflector From: cal_reflector Date: May 26th, 2012 10:25 pm (UTC) (Link)
*tilts head* I think you're being literal, but I could be wrong, in which case the baked potato is, oh, I don't know, Anise/Guy and the wilted Tear/Luke with parmesan cheese is... I don't know.

True; but the chef should not let the sides and appetizer and bread fills you up before you get to the steak. Save room for the steak.
mellowcandle From: mellowcandle Date: May 26th, 2012 11:10 pm (UTC) (Link)
I'm just saying, even when you think you don't want spinach, once it's there and you see how good it is, you're like, "Mmm, spinach!" Good spinach makes the meal better and overall more satisfying.

Anyway, this would not be a separate subplot for Luke and Tear. This would let them come into the main plot briefly, because after the wedding, they're going to shuffle back off to Daath and probably not be seen again. I feel like I should give them some face time while I can, and plus have some Tear-Natalia and Luke-Guy friendship moments.
4 pathetic excuses or justify your existence