a. Drabbling it seems too short and flaky, like it's not enough to do proper respect to her emotional state. "My fiance's dead and I'm sad... no wait, I'm okay now, hugs from Guy are magic."
2. I can't figure out how to end it.
So it might go a touch over 500, which I don't want to do, but cutting out any more really cheapens what she's feeling. Dammit, this is harder than I thought it would be.