Title: Out Here
Genre: Friendship with potential
Summary: Do you know what you want, and do you know when you've found it?
Previous word count 1200; new word count 1842.
And for now the original version is still in my fic journal in case anyone is bored enough to compare the two and see if the changes I made are an improvement or not. I know, I know, my sledgehammer-like subtlety is on full display here.
I'll update it to the new version at some point.
All right, time to work on something else for a while.