L-chan (mellowcandle) wrote,
L-chan
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but procrastinating is easy

So now my problem is do I go with my first idea and write the scene as flashbacky to Nat's conversation with her father, or do I just write it as her explaining to Guy, which is all very "tell not show" and the number one no-no.

And I'm still debating whether her other option is Luke or someone random. Luke makes more sense....
Tags: guy/natalia, how far, untitled guy/nat project
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