L-chan (mellowcandle) wrote,
L-chan
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shouldn't Anise totally be dominating the conversation anyway?

I think the reason I'm having so much trouble with this next part is I don't like having so many characters in a scene. I feel like I have to give them all equal time, equal lines, have the POV character consider each of their reactions.....

I need to not do that, I guess.

It's just really coming out all awkward and stuff.
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