L-chan (mellowcandle) wrote,
L-chan
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Okay, I'm almost done with the Guy parts of the chapter. I have one speech that reads like a non sequitur and I just can't seem to find a transition line that works. I feel like I can't move on from it until I fix it.

The Nat parts are kind of loosely written out, but I think I'm missing the emotional center. I may save one part for later so I don't have to worry about it now.


I am so, so sick of looking at this. I'm reaching the point where I really don't want to work on it anymore.
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