L-chan (mellowcandle) wrote,
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not a problem I usually have

I've got most of the next chapter written out, but typing it, I can't seem to get the flow I need.

I feel like I've got several different things I want to bring up in one conversation, but there's no way to lead from one to the next. After the main topic, it feels like the conversation has come to a natural conclusion, and trying to shoehorn in a couple more points feels awkward and like... it's just not working.

I mean, if the king's done talking to you, you get up and get out. You don't waste more of his time.

Bleh.
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