L-chan (mellowcandle) wrote,
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I can take you away from here

Well, I did some free-writing at Starbucks.

Most of it's crap and unusable is this what NaNo feels like, but I think there's a nugget or two in there that can and should be expanded that I'd not considered until it came out of the pen.

I don't want to start every chapter with "The next morning at breakfast..." but it seems like the best time/setting for them to have any sort of conversation.

I don't know when to bring up what Guy's responsibilities will be. I need to do that, because he's not going to sit on his behind while the maids feed him bonbons all day. But I can't find a good place to drop that in.

And I need to work on the suspense. There's none. Being followed should be more suspenseful. Also swordfights should not be boring.


Bleh. I need a ghost for my action scenes.


JUST. GET. TO. THE. SEX. DAMMIT.
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