Most of it's crap and unusable
I don't want to start every chapter with "The next morning at breakfast..." but it seems like the best time/setting for them to have any sort of conversation.
I don't know when to bring up what Guy's responsibilities will be. I need to do that, because he's not going to sit on his behind while the maids feed him bonbons all day. But I can't find a good place to drop that in.
And I need to work on the suspense. There's none. Being followed should be more suspenseful. Also swordfights should not be boring.
Bleh. I need a ghost for my action scenes.
JUST. GET. TO. THE. SEX. DAMMIT.