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Idiot Control Now
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mellowcandle
mellowcandle
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4 pathetic excuses or justify your existence
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cal_reflector From: cal_reflector Date: October 13th, 2011 02:14 am (UTC) (Link)
Wow.

I can only imagine the agony you were in when you wrote this; it's projected perfectly onto Guy. Poor Guy!

Of all the protagonists, I remember Anise as the only character who had the Bad Girl/Boy trait, and here it seems to have fully developed along with age and the changes that it brings... poor Guy.

As always, your portrayal of Physical Attraction--even painful attraction, dating all the way back to Touya and Tomoyo--, which is crucial to a good romance, is superb. I'm stealing the details about the ear curves and neck line and staring at the lips.

Their coming to agreement on the need to rescue Natalia, and the side track of dangerous attraction makes for an interesting dynamic.
4 pathetic excuses or justify your existence