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I know they don't sound the way I planned them to be - Idiot Control Now — LiveJournal
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mellowcandle
mellowcandle
I know they don't sound the way I planned them to be
4 pathetic excuses or justify your existence
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cal_reflector From: cal_reflector Date: March 9th, 2012 02:58 pm (UTC) (Link)
*looking through playlist for appropriate background music to go with the chapter*

Not bad! Eliza has got to be in on it. It's always the maid. You've shown me before, but I think the conspirators pulled off a good trick here, one that neither the characters nor most readers should see coming.

You know what would be interesting? If the assailant WAS Eliza the maid. No body would expect a girl.
mellowcandle From: mellowcandle Date: March 9th, 2012 06:59 pm (UTC) (Link)
"Not bad" is actually a hugely encouraging comment. I've been stuck on this chapter for over a year and hating it like whoa, so if I've managed to pull off "not bad", then I'm completely satisfied. I'll give it a final once-over and put it up on ff.net in a few days. I need some space from it first.

And I'll tackle those meme questions this weekend. I'm kind of braindead after all this.
cal_reflector From: cal_reflector Date: March 10th, 2012 04:05 am (UTC) (Link)
Just a bit more and you'll get to write Guy and Natalia making out! So fun it could hardly be called work.
mellowcandle From: mellowcandle Date: March 10th, 2012 04:26 pm (UTC) (Link)
I'm still like three chapters from the wedding. Guy isn't the only one frustrated here.
4 pathetic excuses or justify your existence