L-chan (mellowcandle) wrote,
L-chan
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I know what you're saying, so please stop explaining

To try to give myself a jumpstart, I'll go back and reread a couple of chapters to see if I can get back into the flow, remember what was happening, the voices, and all that.

And I see that I'm having Natalia do the exact same thing in this new chapter that she did in an earlier one, and it's not a "consistency of characterization" issue so much as it is a "laziness and repetitiveness of writing" issue.

I swear, if she's going to anticipate Guy like this all the time, I may as well be writing Kaho again.



Except Natalia would never lose an archery competition to Yuk-ito.
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