Nano people aren't impressed, but this is pretty good for me.
D's not impressed, either. He said, "You're still working on that same story? Do you ever finish anything?" No. No, I don't.
I still worry that I'm painting myself into a corner with this plot and that it's not believable. I figure if I have Jade explain most of it, it will somehow have credibility. (Haha, you can't shove it off on Guy, because he doesn't know!)