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Idiot Control Now
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mellowcandle
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4 pathetic excuses or justify your existence
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mellowcandle From: mellowcandle Date: September 11th, 2013 10:16 pm (UTC) (Link)
No, they don't spend much time on it, because either a)they're all the same, really, unless something dramatic! happens, or b)it comes at the end of the story. Since mine's in the middle of the story and politically important, it has to be shown.
cal_reflector From: cal_reflector Date: September 11th, 2013 10:39 pm (UTC) (Link)
It's true that weddings are, often, all kind of the same, even when the protagonist interrupts right before She says "I do."

If the real-world details are difficult, how about focusing on the people who are attending? The intrigue, the snipes, etc.
mellowcandle From: mellowcandle Date: September 12th, 2013 08:11 pm (UTC) (Link)
I'm doing that, but I still need to work on my description, since that's one of my weak points. And looking at flowers is fun.
4 pathetic excuses or justify your existence