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Idiot Control Now
bees on pie, burning rubber tires
mellowcandle
mellowcandle
no break this time
I'm at 3200 words.

I think the first scene is too long. I wanted to have some more girl-bonding, though. Tear gets to make a joke! I love you, Tear, and I'm sorry I just don't know how to write you. You're like Tomoyo. I have no idea what's going on in your head.

I ended up with a super abbreviated version of the conversation I wanted Jo and Nat to have, and in fact they didn't even talk about what I originally planned at all, but I just waited too long to get to that, and it just doesn't fit anywhere. And I've basically handwaved how close Jo and Guy are, like, just go with it, okay?

I still haven't gotten to the actual ceremony, but that's next, and I have no idea how long this thing is going to end up.

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Current Music: reflektor--arcade fire

2 pathetic excuses or justify your existence
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serena_b From: serena_b Date: September 29th, 2013 02:20 am (UTC) (Link)
That's a good amount of words you got there... :)
mellowcandle From: mellowcandle Date: September 29th, 2013 03:33 pm (UTC) (Link)
So many words to say so little!
2 pathetic excuses or justify your existence