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6 pathetic excuses or justify your existence
cal_reflector From: cal_reflector Date: December 23rd, 2014 10:40 pm (UTC) (Link)
Okay, I grant you the voiceovers were somewhat overdone. If there is one weakness of film as a story-telling medium compared to print, it's probably that. Film can't express character's unspoken thoughts and feelings without a voiceover (Shawshank Redemption). In print, there's italicized thoughts and third-person omniscient narrative or first-person narrative.

Also known as Kids on the Slope.
mellowcandle From: mellowcandle Date: December 23rd, 2014 11:34 pm (UTC) (Link)
Except the great thing about film/tv is you have tone of voice, facial expression, body language, that you would have to spell out in print. I never needed voiceovers to tell me about Rin and Haru's struggles. I got it from the art, their expressions, their reactions. It wasn't forced. When I see a character laying on the floor in front of a piano, asleep, sheets of music scattered everywhere, I don't need another character's voiceover telling me he was up all night playing; I got that from the visual. Have faith in your storytelling. Stop hitting me over the head with it.

Whatever it's called, I don't know what that is. You've got me mixed up with someone else, I guess.
6 pathetic excuses or justify your existence